Teddy

A teddy bear with outstretched arms Ready to give you a hug Its button nose and eyes that charm makes it cute and snug Your teddy bear is always there In good times and in bad If you should ever shed a tear It might make teddy sad So don't be worried or alarmed If you should feel a tug A teddy bear with outstretched arms is ready for its hug

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/11/2013 4:37:00 PM

Hey, I am now seeing this on the winners list. It was so cute. a big belated congrats to you.

Len Gasun

Date: 2/3/2013 1:39:00 AM

I really love your poem and I like this sweet teddy bear! Great write indeed! Big congratulations on your win my dear friend, Joseph May! love/hugs, Leonora

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/30/2013 11:54:00 AM

Love, love love it !! Always ready for a teddy bear hug !! Enjoyed and congrats on your win !!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/29/2013 9:11:00 AM

Very nice and one of my favorites. Charming. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 1/29/2013 8:43:00 AM

awesome write from a great poet like you. Congratulations on your win my friend Joseph. Cheers! Maria

Seren Roberts

Date: 1/29/2013 12:03:00 AM

awwww, congrats Joseph .....Seren

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/28/2013 10:59:00 PM

adorable entry, congrats on your win Joseph

Mehnaz Veetil

Date: 1/28/2013 10:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...enjoyed reading....

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/28/2013 9:39:00 PM

Joseph, Congratulations :-) on a cuddly interesting childhood thought and poem. Enjoyed your "Teddy Bear Picnic" winning poem in SandI's contest, ~Always* PD

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 1/28/2013 9:21:00 PM

thank you' SandyIvy

Joseph May
Date: 1/29/2013 8:28:00 AM

Thank you Sandy....glad I was able to place in your contest

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 1/25/2013 11:01:00 AM

Joseph this would also fit in with a nursery rhyme contes or the button contest. A great teddy rhyme. Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2013 10:43:00 PM

joseph, this one even fits in the "button" contest!!! It's very cute.

Joseph May
Date: 1/23/2013 8:37:00 AM

I thought about...I'm not sure yet if I will use it in the button contest

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/22/2013 5:37:00 PM

Your poem is delightful, Joseph! Love, Kim

Joseph May
Date: 1/22/2013 9:50:00 PM

thank you Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/22/2013 3:03:00 PM

Your Teddy sounds sweet and loving, I would like to give your Teddy a big hug. - Good luck in the contest Joseph, my Teddy is also in the contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May
Date: 1/22/2013 3:06:00 PM

thank you Anne....hugs

Reggae Magnet

Date: 1/22/2013 2:45:00 PM

So loving a creature, who would want to hurt a teddy bear?

Joseph May
Date: 1/22/2013 3:05:00 PM

thank you Robert