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Technicolor Skywriting

Maître peintre of exulted hallelujahs skywriting's vastly delusional vapors, whitewashed of stained looking-glass flourished in atmospherical cloudbursts, beyond hallucinations' unearthly enlightenment dreamt 'pon released chimerical technicolor (Maître peintre - master painter)

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/23/2016 12:09:00 AM

Beautifully expressed poem, Paloma. Supremely vivid imagery. Kudos! What does maitre peintre mean? Ty for dropping the knowledge. Lovely pen strokes of a consummate poetess. Ty for sharing. Love always, my dear friend. RW

Chris Green

Date: 10/21/2016 9:07:00 AM

I can see the writing upon the blue skies outside my window. What a brilliantly written and alluring poem. This felt nice to read this morning.

Paloma P
Date: 10/21/2016 10:12:00 AM

Heaven shines upon you and your poetry. :) Many thanks Chris.

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/21/2016 5:17:00 AM

Almost lifted from beautiful chimerical prism to add colors to our black and white reality ...' Maître peintre' with words ...

Paloma P
Date: 10/21/2016 5:39:00 AM

So kind of you to say Probir, many thanks for your picturesque critique.