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Technicolor Daydream

Bottles bobbing in melting ice Little lights littering the house Clicking chatters of party guests gushing Colors creating cosmic creations of fantasy as My mind drifts into a delightfully dreamy bliss This is my first attempt at an alliteration. I may have done it completely wrong. Sorry it is so short as well.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/12/2014 12:09:00 PM
Excellent write - I love it and the imagery is impressive! Bravo!
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Date: 6/12/2014 12:01:00 PM
I think you did it very well. You have a lovely creative gift, Brittany.
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