Tease My Mind

tease my mind. Here I stand gazing at you. Your eyes twinkle from your tears and lips that shine like the morning dew. Your soft voice is music to my ears. I love the firm taut feel of your body while we stand in a warm embrace You're such an intriguing mystery one that seems to transcend this place. You take my hand and lead the way Into a secret garden outside your place Where the soft music begins to play You gently begin to caress my face Leaning down close to my ear. I feel your breath on my cheek While you slowly whisper of all the pleasures you seek As we lay on the mossy ground our bodies are perfectly intertwined. slowly your hand wanders around me,while sensations tease my mind.

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Josefina Costales

Date: 7/29/2015 2:25:00 AM

I like how all the rhyming verses do not appear forced, flow smooth while getting warmer to the teasing the mind image.

Bonnie Hollywood-Cutts
Date: 7/29/2015 7:25:00 PM

THANKS so much for your kind comment. I'm glad you like it I've been writing for contests. and this is one that had to be sensual or romantic without being to far into erotic nature.

Aurore Severo

Date: 7/28/2015 11:31:00 AM

very romantic, I like!

Bonnie Hollywood-Cutts
Date: 7/29/2015 7:26:00 PM

Thnaks for taking a moment to read this and leaving me your thoughts

Paul Callus

Date: 7/28/2015 10:58:00 AM

Your words easily manage to tease our imagination, Bonnie! A lovely and pleasant offering! ~ All the best. // paul

Bonnie Hollywood-Cutts
Date: 7/28/2015 11:18:00 AM

Thanks. I've been trying to expand my topcis and styles. I'm part of another poetry group that has some really interesting contest prompts. So I've been writing things like this one . In hopes of bringing my fantasies and sensual side to life again. I appreciate the read and comments.