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Tears On the Wind

Too often the nights were spent Crying myself to sleep Too often my heart was broken For the promises he didn't keep It took me years to build up After he'd torn so much apart But Jesus reached out to hold me And pieced together my broken heart When I think back and remember The hard way it had to end Those tears came from a broken place But now... Now they're just tears on the wind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/6/2014 8:53:00 PM
Great write Bethany. A lot of strength especially in the ending. Good luck and have a great weekend!
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Bethany St John
Date: 7/9/2014 2:46:00 PM
Thank you Vincent :)
Date: 5/28/2014 2:26:00 PM
Very nice poem...good luck in the contest...Noelle
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Bethany St John
Date: 6/6/2014 5:13:00 PM
Thank you Noelle!
Date: 5/28/2014 1:37:00 PM
Great write. Very heart-felt. I particularly liked the second quatrain. Thanks for commenting on mine.
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Bethany St John
Date: 6/6/2014 5:14:00 PM
Thanks Mark. Appreciate your comments.

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