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Tears On Santa's Cheeks

TEARS ON SANTA'S CHEEKS Daddy's little girl is going. Daddy's little girl is slowly leaving... Silent night... it's what the angels are singing Outside there are ringing laughter, however-- in a hospital bed which was cold white as the snow lies the body of a little girl, d e a d. Her little soul just had to go. She just had to go ahead than the others. Her once sun kissed face now the palest cream. Her once twinkling eyes now shut so tight. The glow of light and love she always bring was lost on Christmas night, as Santa stood in red and white holding a present on his hands staring at the child his eyes wet with falling tears for his little girl has died. _______________________________________________ © 12:02 am, November 27, 2014

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/14/2015 7:53:00 PM

sweet win Olive.... Linda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/24/2015 7:30:00 AM

thank you Linda... :)!

Skat A

Date: 5/14/2015 5:31:00 PM

OLIVE, congrats on your Screwed III win. SKAT

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/24/2015 7:29:00 AM

thank you SKat.. :)~

Jan Allison

Date: 5/13/2015 9:36:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats - such a beautifully penned but so sad a poem:-) Hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/24/2015 7:28:00 AM

thanks much Jan.. :)!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/27/2014 9:22:00 AM

riveting piece, eloi... ang lalim ng tula mo; I am impressed!.. still here in pinas?.. let's meet up!... huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/28/2014 8:22:00 AM

still here Nette.. gue kailan b free mo?! thanks.. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 11/26/2014 4:04:00 PM

Oh this is so sad. You know how to pluck the strings of our sentiments. This should do well if it's for the contest. I give you a 7. Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/27/2014 3:01:00 AM

Thanks much Paul.. :) I was just inspired with the reality that on Christmas day not all are happy.. :) and atleast that day the least we can do who are happy is to whisper a prayer for those who are not.. God bless us all.. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/26/2014 3:23:00 PM

beautifully penned so touching yet so so so so so sad:-( its a 7 from me:-) hugs jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/27/2014 2:59:00 AM

Thanks much JAn.. :) hugs and hugs much.. :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/26/2014 1:04:00 PM

touching very beautifully penned piece olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/26/2014 4:55:00 PM

Thanks much Liam.. :)

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/26/2014 12:29:00 PM

Very beautiful Olive, but you should supply a Kleenex box with this kind of poetry. It just broke my heart. I had a friend who's son died Christmas day playing with his new electric train set. Christmas was never the same for that family.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/26/2014 4:53:00 PM

that's really sad Brenda.. :) I chose even Silent Night as it seems the melody is somewhat melancholic but when see as you see the lyrics the message is about happiness.. same goes to this poem that not everyone is happy during this day.. :)

James Fraser

Date: 11/26/2014 12:13:00 PM

Many a child is born on Christmas Day, yet many a child is lost on Christmas Day. Sad but true words in your poetry Olive, James.....

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/26/2014 4:50:00 PM

thanks James.. :) and as far as the world is concerned it's a reality that while others are happy on this day, they are some who are sad also.. this what I want to portray here...

Len Gasun

Date: 11/26/2014 10:54:00 AM

A beautifully sad story and poem for Christmas this is my dear friend Olive. Great job as always! I enjoyed the read. Thank you so much for sharing! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/26/2014 4:45:00 PM

thanks so much Leonora.. :) I appreciate it... :)