Tears of Love

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the tears from my eyes are sentimental sprinkles cried from loving you

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/31/2016 8:28:00 PM

that is a really cute phrase, sentimental sprinkles!! Sweet.

Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2016 8:50:00 PM

I wish I could take credit for it, but it's what my ex called my tears. Thanks for reading this one.

White Sage

Date: 1/31/2016 7:45:00 PM

that love's surely strong, this is touching with that pic, well penned senryu there Lin

Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2016 7:50:00 PM

Thank you very much, Sage ;)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/31/2016 1:40:00 PM

Love is such an emotional state that cannot be embraced without shedding a few tears, rather they be happy tears or sad. This is beautiful Lin! #7

Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2016 3:38:00 PM

You're exactly right, Connie. I'd even settle for a balance, but life doesn't always allow us what we'd like to have. Thank you for your great compliments.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/31/2016 10:29:00 AM

an emotive write cleansing one's sorrow, lin... this is lovely!..huggs

Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2016 3:36:00 PM

Thanks so very much, Nette.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/31/2016 10:18:00 AM

We cry tears of happiness or tears of joy - love the poem Lin:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 1/31/2016 10:23:00 AM

oops I meant sadness in my comment not joy:-( hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 1/31/2016 10:20:00 AM

These could also be tears of sorrow. It works either way, and sometimes love is cause for both. Thank you, Jan.