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Tear's Journey

I feel you inside me somewhere near my core as heartbreak begins watching a somber story unfold feeling incapable of changing the course of wrong to right I feel you enter my heart as I sense an internal sob raging against my resolution to stay detached from the sorrow to leave the injustice out of my reach others to pick up the pieces Then you totally go against my wishes by rising from deep within me to gather at my sight making unclear the stand I am trying to take though uncertainty prevails A blink sets forth your tangible journey bringing into focus the path I am to take By: Shani Fassbender For the contest: Personify a Tear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/4/2011 10:37:00 AM
I see you all found some inspiration while I was not at the Soup this weekend. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and will be back again soon to read more Shani. May you have a week of good health, joy and sunshine to light up your life. Love, Carol
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