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Tears In the Rain

Tears in the rain This lonely heart of mine Has forever lived upon my sleeve As a commentary to my life As I watched the precious ones leave Building walls to protect me With my blood on every brick Rarely venturing beyond them For the fear.... Of the path that I may pick When I’m standing in the darkness Struggling with the pain I watch my blackened tears Disappear, into the rain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/16/2018 7:10:00 PM
Lovely piece ?
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Date: 1/16/2018 11:54:00 AM
Such an emotional and deep poem.
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Date: 1/15/2018 10:46:00 AM
Hi Alexander, It's a very heartfelt and moving poem. reads like a note to diary of a bruised heart; going to extremes to protect yourself. (understandably so). A winter of heartbreak if you will. But as you know after winter comes Spring! May it be colourful, blissful with the bloom of new beginnings
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