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Tears In the Rain

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Raindrops on window coalesce to create rivulets, that run down the window pane. They are like teardrops, which emanate from pain deep within, and which run down the face, leaving snail trails that glisten, showcasing the ache and suffering amassed. Seldom do these drops free-fall on a chute, but when they do they splatter with a splish, splosh, plonk and shatter, leaving a spray pattern as clear evidence on the ground.

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Date: 6/16/2023 9:48:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this, the imagery was beautiful
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John Anderson
Date: 6/16/2023 10:09:00 AM
Thank you for your comment. Great to hear from you. Cheers and Best Wishes.
Date: 6/15/2023 12:35:00 PM
Well said with wonderful word pairings and images, John. Thank you for sharing this poem with its plaintive tears.
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John Anderson
Date: 6/15/2023 1:34:00 PM
thanks a lot, Cheers and Best Wishes

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