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Tears In a Bottle

Tears in a Bottle doors open, doors close wasted opportunities – tears in a bottle 07-22-2014 Contest: One Solo Epic Senryu or Haikyu – In a Bottle Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A Placement: 6th

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/1/2014 4:46:00 PM

treasures in a bottle beautifully painted piece bless you

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/5/2014 11:38:00 AM

Many thanks, dear Liam, my friend, for your wonderful compliments and great support! Warmest regards. Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 8/29/2014 8:08:00 PM

Love this cool Senryu! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 9/3/2014 7:05:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear Kika! Have a wonderful day! Pandita

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/21/2014 5:24:00 AM

Inventive one. congrats on the win

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/21/2014 7:30:00 AM

Thank you kindly, Dr. Ram!

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/20/2014 10:22:00 PM

Congrats on your win Pandita!!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/21/2014 7:31:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Richard!

Mark Trichet

Date: 8/20/2014 9:18:00 PM

turn a -ve into +ve, sell the tears! Nicely done Pandita, loved it....congrats

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/21/2014 7:31:00 AM

Mark, thank you so very much - glad you loved it!

Tim Smith

Date: 8/20/2014 7:46:00 PM

So sad Pandita...I really like it..hugs Tim

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/21/2014 7:32:00 AM

Hi Tim, many thanks and I'm happy that you liked this one!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2014 3:19:00 PM

that is pretty cool. Tears in a bottle! Congrats for your win.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/21/2014 7:33:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Andrea - glad that you liked this one!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/20/2014 10:38:00 AM

anytime Pandita...LINDA

Paul Callus

Date: 8/20/2014 10:03:00 AM

Stopping by again with congratulations, Pandita' well done. // paul

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/20/2014 10:08:00 AM

Many thanks my friend for your great support! Warmest regards. Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/20/2014 9:39:00 AM

Pandita, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/20/2014 10:07:00 AM

Thank you dear Linda for honoring me with a placement in your contest! Warmest regards. Pandita

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/4/2014 10:40:00 PM

Nice words written here and very true. When opportunities knock on your door - take them, they don't come often. Good write... Lucilla

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 8/5/2014 7:15:00 AM

Thank you so very much, my sweet friend! Your comments and compliments always mean so much to me! Have a day full of sunshine! Pandita

Elmer Candol

Date: 7/30/2014 9:56:00 PM

This a great experience. I like the line.. message: If there's a opportunity just grab it don't hesitate..

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/31/2014 7:02:00 AM

Thank you, my friend, Elmer for you wonderful comments, compliments, and encouragement! It means a lot to me! Kindest regards!

Peter Dome

Date: 7/28/2014 2:13:00 PM

A sad but but one I only know too well. take care Pete. great write.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/28/2014 2:17:00 PM

Thank you kindly, dear Pete, for stopping by and complimenting my work! I truly appreciate it! Warmest regards.

Gry Christensen

Date: 7/28/2014 12:16:00 PM

Captured tears, captured tears of regret...........Very nice! Thank you for your kind comment on my poem.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/28/2014 1:58:00 PM

Thank you, my friend for you wonderful comments, compliments, and encouragement! It means a lot to me! Kindest regards!

Dimitrios Karagkounis

Date: 7/28/2014 5:32:00 AM

Nice! ..tears in a bottle.. I like it.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/28/2014 6:48:00 AM

Many thanks, dear Dimitrios, for your kind compliments which I very much appreciate. Warmest regards. Pandita

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/27/2014 10:28:00 AM

meaningful Pandita.! God bless .. I am sorry for not replying to you long.. I have been so busy.. Hope all is well..

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/27/2014 12:29:00 PM

Hi Olive, thank you so very much for stopping by with your sweeet comments and kind compliments which I truly appreciate. Have a beautiful day, my friend!

Lyn Murray

Date: 7/25/2014 6:12:00 PM

Simply beautiful!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/26/2014 11:35:00 AM

Dear Lyn, thank you kindly for your lovely compliment! Warmest regards!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 7/25/2014 8:46:00 AM

Wow opportunities really swallows up the syllable count. Nicely done. Best of luck in the contest.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/25/2014 2:12:00 PM

Hi Scott, thanks for the kind comments and compliment which I truly appreciate. Warmest regards!

Barney Taylor

Date: 7/24/2014 12:10:00 PM

I really like this. It is a single idea like an embryonic story with a thousand possible plots

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/24/2014 12:53:00 PM

Hi Barney, thank you so very much for your kind comments and compliments which I truly appreciate. Have a great day!

Michael Ellis

Date: 7/23/2014 7:47:00 PM

Beautifully expressed

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/23/2014 8:46:00 PM

Hi Michael, thank you kindly for your sweet compliments. Warmest regards to you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2014 6:57:00 PM

VERY nicely done. I think PD will love it.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/23/2014 7:37:00 PM

Dear Andrea, many thanks for your compliments and good wishes which I truly appreciate! Kindest regards to you, my friend!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 7/23/2014 5:54:00 PM

very beautifully painted piece

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/23/2014 7:38:00 PM

My dear Liam, thank you so kindly. Best wishes to you, my friend!

Jim Tidd

Date: 7/23/2014 12:47:00 PM

Who said you couldn't write short poetry? :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/23/2014 4:38:00 PM

Well, I'm trying - hopefully I will improve as I go along and learn from more seasoned poets:-)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/23/2014 8:14:00 AM

Good one Hope you're having a good day! Light & Love

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/23/2014 9:02:00 AM

My dear Debbie, thank you so kindly. Best wishes to you, my friend!

Paul Callus

Date: 7/22/2014 2:33:00 PM

This is another good senryu, Pandita. John's comment is also what crossed my mind while reading it. gl in the contest. // paul

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/22/2014 2:45:00 PM

Thank you very much, Paul. I truly appreciate your support and encouragement! Have a great day!