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Tears Dry Hard

Tears leave no stain Unlike blood Can be wiped away Then no longer remain Unless understood 8-8-2014 Donna Jones Wrote this after reading Caleb's Elly Jane poems.....love ya lil bro..crying with ya...

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Date: 7/1/2019 10:16:00 AM
Strong read. Liked it honesty.
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Date: 1/28/2015 8:24:00 AM
This is a very wonderful piece. Good work!
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Date: 1/14/2015 8:55:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one again Donna.
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Date: 11/20/2014 11:43:00 PM
Donna, it's so good to see you here, but where is some new poetry for us?? You gotta put something up!!
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Date: 11/20/2014 8:09:00 AM
Good morning Donna, it was so nice to have your visit yesterday. I am glad you are well.
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Date: 11/19/2014 2:11:00 PM
Sad sweet tears... I'm with you, Donna, dear Donna! Loving hugs, Jack XXX
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Date: 11/15/2014 6:54:00 AM
Great soulful XXXXX Love..rajat
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Date: 11/9/2014 11:39:00 PM
wow, a deep one, and so good. I adore Caleb and sure miss him not being here. I wanted to tell you that Kayod5 has written a poem Where is Donna JOnes. It is very nice. You should go see it!
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Date: 11/5/2014 11:12:00 PM
I real missed this away mother of mine...I don't know what happened to her....Just missing her and the poem is real touching i wish I could understand the tears are what for so that they can create stain as blood does.......missing you mama!
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Date: 10/18/2014 10:04:00 AM
Dropping by to say hi again. I hope you are well.
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Date: 10/18/2014 8:00:00 AM
How are you Donna? Quite an age, I hope all is well with you? I real miss you,please drop some lines and assure me all is well. Have a lovely weekend.
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Date: 10/1/2014 5:28:00 AM
deep beautiful drops of love heartfelt bless you
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Date: 9/14/2014 11:49:00 PM
Hi Donna, what is happening, I emailed you many times as I was worried for you. Please let me know. Terry xoxo
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Date: 8/29/2014 10:45:00 PM
Hi Donna...Very nice write....Hope you are well.....love
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Date: 8/29/2014 6:17:00 PM
Stopping by again...MISS you my friend - Tim
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Date: 8/20/2014 9:03:00 AM
Felt tears. Well penned. Tfs
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Date: 8/15/2014 8:33:00 PM
Dropping by to say hi, I hope all is well in your world. Hugs Rick
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Date: 8/12/2014 7:03:00 AM
So glad to see a new one from you. And it was worth the wait. Such power and emotion in a few lines.
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Date: 8/11/2014 9:31:00 AM
You had me at the title. So much expressed in such few words. Bravo Donna.
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Date: 8/9/2014 6:08:00 PM
Love you, MD. So glad to read you again. Yes...Caleb went through a hard time. I'm glad you wrote about that to show your sympathy. Tears are a Language God Understands. That's the name of a song that speaks to what you have written. Sending you hugs.
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Date: 8/9/2014 5:56:00 PM
SO glad to see you back writing again Donna; you have been sorely missed...I've been out of the loop awhile myself... This gem is short and to the point yet LOADED with insight and wisdom and what a last line! God bless you my friend - Tim
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Date: 8/8/2014 2:39:00 PM
- Tears is the eye's own language .... but you can not write with tears - Touching poem, Donna !!! - Hope all is well with you - happy weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/8/2014 1:33:00 PM
dear donns.. I miss you!... a most profound write so memorably penned.. how are you?... prayers for your mom-in -law.. huggs
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Date: 8/8/2014 12:21:00 PM
Stain and away make for beautiful slant rhyme. Mysterious last line as well.
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Date: 8/8/2014 12:18:00 PM
Wow...how moving..I will have to go read his...hugs Tim
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Date: 8/8/2014 12:38:00 PM
Brought me to tears

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