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Tears a Sad Sad Day

Now what comes among tears an experience that is all sad even various times aplenty makes one realise so really bad There's a young boy Tom an only son who's in love with Jane whom he wed a union planned from above Being engaged Tom got a shock living with his mum and dad Tom's mum had a heart attack so fatal passed away and died very sad Then Tom was wed less than a year Jane his wife left this earth two deaths so near made life hard all of this with stammer since birth But strength came from heaven above Tom survived no matter the tears put his trust in God for help prayer brings grace so very clear (This is a fictional piece that I've written with the prompt of writing a really sad piece of what life can bring upon us.)

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Date: 10/19/2023 3:04:00 AM
Such a sad poem Gordon and I too, am glad to know that it’s only fiction. A very well written poem and touching. The last stanza is inspiring for all. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 10/19/2023 5:01:00 AM
Thanks Christina, Glad you enjoyed this piece and found it inspiring too. Blessings always,Gordon
Date: 10/18/2023 7:00:00 AM
Life is all ups and downs, and thats life, so many unexpected loss and so much we go through youve told us a very poignant story. It truly is sad, and made me feel so much. I hope life is kind to you , either way your way with words is powerful really! Loved this
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 10/18/2023 9:17:00 AM
Thanks IE, Glad you were impressed by this piece and for your encouraging words. It is well here, for this was a fictional tale. Blessings,Gordon
Date: 10/17/2023 9:47:00 PM
A moving poem, Gordon, glad it's fiction, only God can wipe away all tears, so very true.. Hope you are doing well:)
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 10/18/2023 2:12:00 AM
Thanks Joanna, Glad you enjoyed this piece and found it a moving piece. All is well here just back from week in English lake district which was relaxing and also got news from hospital that I've all clear for the prostate cancer that I had 6 years ago. Blessings always,Gordon
Date: 10/16/2023 3:49:00 PM
WoW! Gordon, This is a sad piece indeed. It was heartbreaking to read these lines, what a relief to know it's fiction. But in reality, somewhere in the world, someone has experienced such heartache and devastation. You conveyed the message very well my friend Alexis
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 10/17/2023 5:32:00 AM
Thanks Alexis, Glad this impressed you and indeed who knows what dear soul has went through this experience but trust they will come through stronger in the other side. Blessings,Gordon
Date: 10/16/2023 2:40:00 PM
Very sad poem Gordon written by a compassionate kind soul! Debx
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 10/17/2023 5:30:00 AM
Thanks Deb, Glad this impressed you and for leaving such nice comment, blessings,Gordon

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