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Tears

Tears are the body's weakness, They say. As if your rain cloud eyes Could be turned off within a storm. The drizzle on your cheeks, Dried up in a monsoon. It's like poking a bear with a stick, And getting mad when he attacks you. You poke and prod and prey upon me, Fueling anger at my tears. Slowly drowning, Suffocating, I wallow in the pain you've gifted me. Move on, They say. You have friends and family here for you. But they're just mere ghosts, Fading into the past. I have pain and pity and puffy eyes, All I have is my tears. Date: July 27, 2016 Three Stanzas- ThreeOnly Contest

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Date: 7/29/2016 7:40:00 AM
Megan, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/28/2016 8:55:00 PM
Very creative poem, Megan! Welcome to the Soup:)
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Date: 7/28/2016 6:02:00 PM
Very sad, when all we have left are our tears. Great first post, Megan. Welcome to poetry soup!
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Date: 7/28/2016 6:04:00 AM
A good poem ... Enjoyed reading ..
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Date: 7/28/2016 4:15:00 AM
Megan A,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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