Tears

Tears All days and all nights I can hardly see the light Through my burning eyes. Tears ooze like blood from fresh wound And tastes like bitter poison. 2/11/15 Hija de la Luna For Rick Parise' Tanka Tears contest

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/10/2015 8:54:00 PM

A bitter sweet poem, well done!!

Kp Nunez

Date: 2/25/2015 10:32:00 AM

Ah, my beautiful friend, who was crazy enough to have made you shed these tears? It seems it's me who have been remiss! I missed this one...I know you'll forgive me, crazy that I am. Like it though. Hugs and smiles from lovely me :D

Hija De La Luna
Date: 3/3/2015 3:19:00 AM

there always is forgiveness, crazy lovely Kim! and thank you for liking this one :)) love and light!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/20/2015 7:14:00 AM

Hi Hija...After a long time...How are you? Good poem. Liked it. God bless. I invite you to my page.Love

Hija De La Luna
Date: 2/20/2015 7:44:00 AM

Yep, Rajat, caught up with the world and all good so far with tinge of biting realities :) thank you for liking the poem! Will visit your page and hope you well