Tears

an ocean of tears drowns my brokenhearted soul floating on despair the wings of love fly away my wistful heart seeks solace (6)

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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/23/2012 4:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine win Joseph xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2012 3:51:00 PM

Very nicely done and won!! congratulations!

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/22/2012 12:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your win friend Joseph.. like it :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/22/2012 11:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D."s "Tanka~sad song" Joseph. Love, Carol XXXX

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 10/22/2012 9:13:00 AM

Awesome Joseph...many congrats on your win!!!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 10/22/2012 7:22:00 AM

aww... congrats on your win with this sad piece!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/21/2012 4:20:00 PM

CONGRATS JOSEPH FOR A BIG WIN WITH THIS EMOTIONAL TANKA LUV ..

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/21/2012 2:42:00 PM

beautifully penned, congrats on your win in the contest

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2012 11:52:00 AM

Joseph, congratulations with your to be or not to be tanka poem in my contest... take care of yourself' always~PD

Juniper Lock

Date: 10/20/2012 9:01:00 PM

Lovely Joseph! JL

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/11/2012 4:48:00 PM

Nurse fuzzy here to comfort you! When you reach bottom there's nowhere to go but up so don't give up hope.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2012 3:02:00 PM

STill waiting on a new poem, my friend!! Happy WEdnesday!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/10/2012 2:13:00 PM

Stopping by your poetry list today to tell you thank you for your kind comments on my writing. Your comment was truly appreciated Joseph. Love, Carol

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/10/2012 10:26:00 AM

Hi Joseph, this is very profound, and so sad... very well written....

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/9/2012 8:01:00 AM

An emotive work..Sorry that you are brokenhearted..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Jack Ellison

Date: 10/8/2012 1:25:00 PM

A sad but beautifully written tanka, my friend... kudos! Thanks for sharing!

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 10/8/2012 1:42:00 AM

NICELY done Joseph! Love the imagery!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2012 12:45:00 AM

GREAT tanka, Joseph. One of the best of ones I have seen about tears and sadness!!!

Goran Rahim

Date: 10/7/2012 4:50:00 PM

very deep tanka, well done.