Tears

tears cloud my vision - hazy shades of earth spinning until winter ends

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Deck Fitzgerald

Date: 3/11/2012 4:15:00 PM

A sweet write Rhonda and my thoughts turn to the arrival of spring next week , Hugs and best wishes , Declan xxx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/11/2012 12:55:00 PM

expressed so eloquently Rhonda.. I am a Summer girl so really enjoyed these words to see winter end luv.. good luck if for a contest..

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 3/11/2012 12:43:00 PM

a picture perfect description of winter....(brrrr) I can't wait till it's over either.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/11/2012 12:38:00 PM

Yes, sometimes those winters are very longgggg....Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sometimes the winter of our life is long also..Thanks for the kind review of my work..I am glad that you knew about the Hymns used..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/11/2012 9:20:00 AM

tears clear the soul to make way for rainbows, rhonda... a splendid senryu that makes my day!..:) huggs!

Erich Goller

Date: 3/11/2012 9:08:00 AM

It wont be long and spring will clear your vision, a very nice expressed Senryu.God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Jim Pemberton

Date: 3/11/2012 7:26:00 AM

Thank you for your comments and your wonderful poems! Have a very blessed day! JP

Kash Poet

Date: 3/10/2012 11:56:00 PM

A sad write from you Rhonda.Nice use of metaphores.