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"tears"

You can't sweep up tears nor can they be blown away only held and seen.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2010 8:41:00 PM

Tears seem a big theme in the poems of yours I read tonight. Now let's see some smiles! Goodnight, Michael. Luv, Andrea

Sherelle Smith

Date: 11/7/2010 9:27:00 AM

Your words are very beautiful your poems always jump off the page into my heart great Senryu

Audonus Taylor

Date: 11/6/2010 6:14:00 PM

Thanks for the return comment man. I love this piece as well, not as much as the other I read which was just amazing, but this is great stuff. So few words but so true. You are like a philospher/writer

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 11/6/2010 7:45:00 AM

This is truly wonderful Michael.I love the images the beautiful sentiments and in so few words!To me,class 1 poetry.Soon as I read this it blew me away. Love June(S)

Kim Hilliker

Date: 11/6/2010 4:38:00 AM

Something to ponder, Michael. Good Senryu. Thanks for sharing.

Date: 11/5/2010 4:42:00 PM

Thought provoking poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. I really like the last line. Keep up the good writing. Thank you also for your kind words on my poem. Have a good weekend. Karen

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/5/2010 8:23:00 AM

Very cute and thought provoking with great images, Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/5/2010 7:12:00 AM

Thanks for your comments on my poem Diwali. Please share my blogs on Diwali festival,Michael

Fabiyas M V

Date: 11/5/2010 7:03:00 AM

it is true,dear friend.beautifully presented,fabiyas

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/5/2010 4:30:00 AM

Some see them as a weakness Michael, to me it's a form of cleansing and sometimes a renewal of strength.. Another favorite because this is so true - love W

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 11/4/2010 8:40:00 PM

Brilliant Michael sad too

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/4/2010 4:35:00 PM

And easily replenished. Love it...BG

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/4/2010 4:21:00 PM

interesting thought! Light & Love

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/4/2010 4:20:00 PM

so true, Michael...jimbo

John Rhinem

Date: 11/4/2010 3:52:00 PM

Smile ~ But sooo very precious they are "My Dear Friend, Michael J. Falotico!!!" ~ Psalm 56:8 ~ It makes my heart often bleed to behold tears from Anyones "Beautiful Eyes" &, "Your Treasures" poe is but a stirring verse of bittersweet splendour this, snap-shots image of "The Beauty Inside 'Your Precious Soul!!!" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You & Yours Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'My Dear Friend;'" Bye!:) ~

James Fraser

Date: 11/4/2010 3:21:00 PM

Touching Senyru Michael. Thank you for always kind words, your Highlander friend >> James :)

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/4/2010 3:18:00 PM

Wonderful write, Michael..could it be because they're so precious?? Much depth in this Senryu. Always, Audrey

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 11/4/2010 3:13:00 PM

Michael, This is a very deep and beautiful Senryu. Thank you for sharing As Always, Shar

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/4/2010 3:12:00 PM

Wow.. we all wrote about tears in some form today .. awesome statement in your lines so perfect my W.K. from your J.G. with luv..always...

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/4/2010 3:10:00 PM

Enjoyed the tearful write...