Tears

Tears sting my eyes but I can never let you see me cry Stand strong and still. That's what I'll do. Make you think I am everything without you. You see me pass and flash a smile I haven't seen you in a while. I wish you knew that I would give my life... Just to spend an eternity alone with you.

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/18/2010 11:06:00 AM

Way to stand by your decision. Stay strong. It's what's right.

Gabrielle Clemens

Date: 3/8/2010 12:09:00 PM

i see you have a lot of hidden fear inside of you, possibly a fear that you dont want others to know you're hurting and that is very common. you want others to think you're strong and that you can hold your composure, when deep down, you want to let it out do me a favor? whenever you feel like this... just cry, tell him or her what you think, and how you feel. Be honest and open. Hiding your emotions wont do anything but tear you to pieces

Niall Greene

Date: 2/22/2010 11:36:00 AM

another nice poem britt

Joanna Smith

Date: 2/22/2010 11:33:00 AM

wow this to me came off very powerful! i loved it the last stanza was a great one i feel that about my hubby but he knows. great piece here!=)Jo

Jay Loveless

Date: 2/17/2010 11:25:00 AM

cha, i def can feel this <3

James Fraser

Date: 2/13/2010 6:51:00 PM

Romantic rhyme for eternity glows, the desire of > in her heart she grows >> lovely poem Brittany >> James

Anya Chebukina

Date: 2/1/2010 10:47:00 AM

No one can write this kind of poem and know what it feels like. It's good to know that there really IS some one who can put that much pain into something so magical.

Adrian Torbenson

Date: 2/1/2010 10:43:00 AM

dang this poem is breath taking i really felt sad that you could not have this person but someone day ull have someone .. good job keep writtin

Adrian Torbenson

Date: 1/22/2010 10:42:00 AM

very nicely wirtten i can feel some of the feelings you went through to make this poem.. good job keep writtin

G G

Date: 1/15/2010 3:40:00 PM

i know how that feels...i really like this poem

Jay Loveless

Date: 1/7/2010 10:52:00 AM

Wow, ive been here Britt. Nice work. And Escape the fate = amazing

The Melody Sings

Date: 1/6/2010 6:37:00 AM

Escape the Fate ROCKS!!!! I have heard them and LOVE them!

Jay Smith

Date: 1/5/2010 11:43:00 AM

Soooo Cute!!! haha what a fantasy, you should listen to Escape The Fate; frickin amazing band!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/18/2009 5:28:00 PM

I would like to welcome you to poetry soup, happy writing, and no typos to you!

Abella Fettington

Date: 12/18/2009 10:46:00 AM

I really like this poem. I can feel your pain. It is so sad. Best wishes and hope that things go better for you.