Tears

Tears dropped gently tonight. Its cheek shivered from the cold weather's wind. The tear shone as it softly glided down its eye's hill; To show those who hurt its dear friend; it's body's heart..Tonight, the tear shall glow to be the mirror of those who threw harsh words to its ears To show them how careless they are to... Destroy a smile that once was spread when the eye saw them. Now, they are worthless and don't deserve any of those smiles..From now the eye shall never look back for they don't deserve a glance.. Never weakness only to show pain .... ... .. .

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Stanley Jacques

Date: 12/30/2008 9:07:00 AM

deep , I like the way you move the words.

Breana Wiggins

Date: 12/13/2008 4:34:00 PM

Wow...deep...powerful... *Breana*

Derrick Burton

Date: 12/10/2008 7:17:00 AM

yeah never to look back is right but you can always learn from any eveent in life is what i heard as a child, painful poems are the back bones of life, how must oneunload of the burdens which pile on our souls through the years. pray too, but even the old testiment yields poets.

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/7/2008 8:58:00 AM

Wow...this was incredibly sad, and the form just perfectly describes the emotional road....and yes....not to look back is the way to survive. ~ Carrie