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Teardrops On Roses

I slipped on a teardrop and landed in a song about my broken heart, cryin' all night long. Tears started fallin' from my sullen eyes when I knew we'd be saying a sad goodbye. I didn't write a love song cause I was fallin' apart. I was tryin' to be strong but was cryin' in my heart. This time the pain hurt real bad, I cried so much. I'll weep even more when I start missin' his touch. My teardrops fell on roses, like the mornin' dew. I wrote another somber line about feelin' blue. I didn't write a love song cause I was fallin' apart. I was tryin' to be strong but was cryin' in my heart. Lyrics started spillin' out. They wouldn't stop, witherin' fragile roses with each salty drop. I slipped on a teardrop and wrote this song. Then I sent it to the man who did me wrong. This is not a love song but it'll help to mend my heart. I'll put the past behind me and make a brand new start. 6/21/16 I Slipped On A Teardrop and Landed......

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Date: 6/21/2016 11:06:00 AM
Well written poem, Teardrops and roses very good x very sad x
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Date: 6/21/2016 10:28:00 AM
Well done! I can see this as a country song.
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