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Teardrops

Raindrops Upon green leaves A shine upon them, gleam Like teardrops upon cheeks, cleansing Redeem. By CarolineCécile Copyright © 10.04.10

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/25/2010 8:23:00 AM
Caroline, it's been quite a while since you've posted new work. Hoping all is well with you. I see Gert knows French as well! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/24/2010 6:56:00 AM
Bonjour, Caroline, J'espère que vous avez eu une belle journée! Lovely Cinquain you've penned here! Du to my visitors I haven't been on Soup much. This is now the time for shining raindrops, but I gúess we'll have an early winter here. Btw I followed your advice, merci beaucoup! Danke für die Kommentare und eine gute Woche! Alles Gute, Gert
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Date: 10/21/2010 10:01:00 AM
Caroline, I picked you this morning to read. So happy I did, this will take me through my day. Its lovely As Always, Shar
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Date: 10/18/2010 1:23:00 AM
This is indeed very profound and beautiful Caroline, awesome poem. Harry
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Date: 10/17/2010 12:20:00 PM
Beautiful....very honest.
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Date: 10/15/2010 8:42:00 AM
HI, there, long time no see. This pretty cinquain has a a great message in it! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/5/2010 9:32:00 AM
A pleasure to read your amazing poetry today Caroline. I wish you the best in your endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/4/2010 3:38:00 PM
Caroline beautiful imagery. Much enjoyed, love Wilma
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Date: 10/4/2010 1:06:00 PM
Very wonderful Cinquain with good images , Caroline
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Date: 10/4/2010 12:49:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work today..Sara
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Date: 10/4/2010 12:21:00 PM
very nice....simple yet elegant in expression...peace , jay
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