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Tear Less Was Only Your First Crime

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Tear Less Was Only Your First Crime

Tear Less Was Only Your First Crime


You thought I forgot you tear less face, as they dropped me body down in to the gates of death? You think I wouldn't come back to find you sitting there smiling even though I left only a night ? Nothing can keep my love from you not even from your gravely hands.I felt in one day everything the dead went through and how when I came back your smile was nothing more then a sham to boost ones pity.I grieve for you I laugh at you I call upon everything that makes you want to stop and break to come to you for you are my evil you are my tears you are the thing that makes me want to steal away your very soul.I have draped you in purple I have turn you into a blue shell I have made my very voice echo throughout your very twisted soul and yet you laugh.Shall someone that is not I go unto you and but a mark of death upon your face and make you run in terror for your on discomfort? You beg me to release you from this bind I shall only laugh only thinking of your not tearful face unlike the the one you had at my point of death.I am free while you will roam the world of fire and demons I shall roam this unstuck earth looking or the thing that shall release my very being.As I walk away from now burning flesh I say
"For ever tear I have cried shall be your punishment you have had your chance for forgiveness but have lost it." and I sink into this earth like a rock in lava.

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  1. Date: 5/16/2012 12:08:00 AM
    Very well written Marcedies. - oxox love Anne-Lise