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Tear a Heart, Shred a Soul

She sat alone Against jagged stones Carving her misery into them Watching the blood, red and worn Retell her sorry tale The ocean waves crashed at her feet As if trying to warn her As if trying to tell her something "He isn't there anymore" But she won't heed the angry voices Nor will she try to move Because the ocean reminds her too much of him His blue eyes, and cold heart And a midnight summer charm She waits until it fades to black and the ocean looks like a black abyss Then she hopes it will swallow her leading her to him Maybe the ocean will take pity And lead her straight to hell And into her long lost love open arms Where he's waiting for her But the ocean refuses to open And refuses to let her drown They try to tell her that he isn't there anymore She has no reason to cry Tear a Heart, Shred a Soul No difference will it make Unless you head the silent whispers That he is waiting on the sand Beneath the moon Watching and Waiting for her return His tale too is a sad one For she will never come back Her ripped up mind Her beaten body Lay in the ocean, buried deep Waiting for him (i have the same poem up on a different site...username XxUnforgivenxX)

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Date: 3/22/2024 6:08:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/7/2016 2:49:00 AM
Ichiwa Kagome, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 9/12/2015 7:56:00 AM
Wow, that is awesome
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