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If I Were a Small tear In your eyes then I would roll down onto your lips In case if I were a tear in my eyes then I would certainly never be crying but would be so happy to leave you a kiss. +++ September 5, 2014 Form: Fibonacci (Syllables-1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, 21...) Dr. Ram Mehta Sixth Place Win Contest: The Poet II by Gautami Phookan

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Date: 9/17/2014 4:51:00 AM
Thank you for this poem, I loved it! The form looks so nice,, and the last line I found very sweet! Congrats Dr Ram on your win,,, and regards
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Date: 9/14/2014 7:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta.
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Date: 9/14/2014 2:00:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/7/2014 11:55:00 AM
Simply delightful Dr. Ram, James :)
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Date: 9/5/2014 4:09:00 PM
I have never used this form before, Dr. Ram. I like what you did. Best wishes.
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Date: 9/5/2014 1:48:00 PM
IVe got to look up this form again...this is very sweet. BG
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Date: 9/5/2014 12:59:00 PM
Beautiful write Dr Mehta I have never seen this form before :-) good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/5/2014 12:05:00 PM
very beautifully written and all the best for the wishes.
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Date: 9/5/2014 11:57:00 AM
Wow Dr Ram that's an amazing one! Great thought n well penned, unique form, best wishes!
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