Tear

a tear falls away in triumph and tragedy- life's lessons revealed..... streaming down my face a crystal tear, unknowing..... I wait for my Lord..... _______________ _________ ____ Contest "Pesonify A Tear" Poet~ Rick Parise

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/26/2011 4:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest ^Rick. I am sorry for the late comment but still having problems with the Soup since they worked on it. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/22/2011 4:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this creative work..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/22/2011 2:43:00 PM

He is always with you. ;) Congrad's on your win! Light & Love Happy Easter

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/22/2011 12:31:00 PM

A beautiful write Rick, congratulations on your win ;)

John Freeman

Date: 4/22/2011 11:59:00 AM

Great to see you in the winner's list, Rick. Congratulations on your poem's success. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

Date: 4/22/2011 10:57:00 AM

Congrats ^Rick on your well deserved win.Enjoyed your poem---kashinath

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/22/2011 7:59:00 AM

Simply and beautifull expressed, dear Rick! Congratulations on your win!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/22/2011 4:40:00 AM

Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest, Rick

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/22/2011 4:28:00 AM

Congrats Rick on another beautiful win in HG's contest on tears.. lovely expressiions in your lines my friend.. enjoy your top spot with luv..

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/21/2011 9:44:00 PM

Dear Rick, Thank-YOU For Supporting My Contest " Personify A Tear " Congratulations On YOUR 5th Place Win LOVE ALWAYS, YOUR Liege...HG

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/21/2011 9:40:00 PM

Very nice Rick. Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce

James Foulk

Date: 3/31/2011 9:40:00 AM

a great write, i give it a ten, but we can only give a seven, keep posting.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/30/2011 9:50:00 PM

Utterly beautiful Rick.. amazing visuals in each Senryu my friend.. good luck in the contest by HG...I wait for my Lord.. awesome luv..

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/30/2011 6:47:00 PM

Dear Rick, I really like this Double Senryu Superb writing with the Feel of a Tear I will be reading more of YOUR POEMS to see if YOUR Feelings are the Same throughout YOUR POETRY Thank-YOU for Supporting My Contest YOUR Liege ALWAYS, LOVE...HG

Dana Smith

Date: 3/30/2011 3:07:00 PM

Wonderful poetry, I really enjoyed reading your poetry today and I'm looking forward to reading more. Take care of yourself. Dana'lynn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/30/2011 2:57:00 PM

Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner...Sara

Francine Roberts

Date: 3/30/2011 2:48:00 PM

emotionally charged, love it , good luck in the contest Rick