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I said to Abigail Dolly, "will you have tea, dear heart?" Of course, she always said yes, oh fond the memory; And on my record player, I played a record of Mozart, Some days, Kitty came and that made tea for three, Long ago, with cookies a la carte. On the shaded porch of my peaceful neighborhood, "Oh, did you say something, Abigail Dolly, pardon me!" Father had made me a little tea table of solid wood, Dappled the hues of my childhood. __________________________ October 30, 2015 Narrative (Rhyme) Written by Broken Wings For the contest, Oil Painting 1-2-3, sponsor, Eve Roper Note: Thank you Eve for letting me use your beautiful painting as inspiration Second Place

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Date: 11/18/2015 4:33:00 PM
Oh, what a happy young, imaginative, and loved girl you pen! Congratulations..:), jill
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Constance La France
Date: 11/18/2015 4:38:00 PM
Thanks Jill for the nice comment and the congratulations
Date: 11/18/2015 8:17:00 AM
One of my favorites, congratulations Constance.
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Date: 11/18/2015 12:57:00 PM
Richard that is so nice to say, thanks for the congratulations
Date: 11/18/2015 7:49:00 AM
BW, congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/18/2015 12:57:00 PM
Thanks for visiting my poem and for the congratulations
Date: 11/17/2015 9:56:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations, Have a nice day. SKAT
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Date: 11/18/2015 1:08:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 11/17/2015 7:20:00 PM
Congrats Broken Wings!! :) Wonderful write!
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Date: 11/18/2015 1:09:00 AM
Laura, thanks for the wonderful and the congrats, appreciate ~
Date: 11/17/2015 7:15:00 PM
Congratulations Broken Wings
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Date: 11/18/2015 1:09:00 AM
Nayda, Thanks so much for the congrats, appreciate ~
Date: 11/17/2015 6:40:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Broken Wings :-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/18/2015 1:10:00 AM
Jan, thanks so much for the congrats ~
Date: 10/30/2015 1:07:00 PM
Absolutely charming broken Wings -Isn't it such a delightful image Eve has used to inspire us - she is so so talented ... I will be round for tea later:-) good luck in the contest:-)hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/30/2015 3:19:00 PM
Afternoon tea with some soupers would be super! I could bake some of my lovely scones with clotted cream and strawberry jam:-) hugs jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 10/30/2015 3:17:00 PM
Jan, Eve's paintings are so beautiful and that particular one could have been painted just for me, love it and I hope my poem honors her art, thanks for the nice comment and yes come for tea, dear heart anytime ~
Date: 10/30/2015 9:07:00 AM
Poem's a-steeping, words steaming in the teapot, remember sugar.
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Date: 10/30/2015 9:52:00 AM
Jim, the tea is ready, thanks for the visit, hope you come back for a cup of words ~

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