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Tea For Two

Did you say you want to know me? Which me could that be ... which of the what-evers that were me when? The one from way back then with pigtails flying behind already learning to hide pain to become another Me that no one could see unless they looked real close? Looked at the daughter, the sister, the student, the friend, the worker, the lover, the wife, the drunk. The Momie me, the widow, the divorced me ... twice .. the divorced from me Me. Which role to know? Age brings them to an end, no more parts to play, no pretend, no stage or lights, only lines etched by time. Naked we arrived to life. Naked we leave emptied of all the layers of all the Me. Perhaps we will know in that other place, that other space, where souls become We.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/8/2011 11:56:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today Sue. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, laughter, and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/23/2010 11:29:00 AM
This is still one of my favorite poems written by you Sue. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2010 2:24:00 PM
...and you will know sweet poet the love of our Master ! A surviving write Sue ! Loved it ! james
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Date: 4/7/2010 11:25:00 AM
Thanks Sue for the tip. I looked the word melt·ing up melt·ing [mélting] adj sweet and tender: full of or causing sweet and tender or sentimental emotion This is what it gave. LOL! A bit confusing. Altho melding means combinding something. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/7/2010 7:31:00 AM
This is gorgeous Sue. Thanks for visiting me ... it's been a while for me too and I'm happy to catch up with you. :)
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Date: 4/5/2010 9:51:00 PM
"Naked we arrived to life, naked we leave emptied..." Very profound and that's just what life is, us playing many parts until we finally conked off. To this Biology grad, it's called 'metamorphosis. I like this write. Fred
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Date: 4/5/2010 1:45:00 PM
I love it Sue
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Date: 4/5/2010 12:07:00 PM
Keep up the good writing Sue. Again, this is one of your best. Waiting for a new poem from you. Thank you for your kind words on mine. Keep on writing!! Have a nice day. Karen
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Date: 4/5/2010 10:01:00 AM
Awesome idea for a write Sue, also so true. As the world turns, we learn, to turn from the past into a better tomorrow. Thank God the Agape builds the new one with use in mind. Thanks for your comments. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/4/2010 12:52:00 PM
This is so outstanding. I agre - "your which to know which one of me . . ." Love it.
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Date: 4/3/2010 2:20:00 PM
beautiful and uplifiting. I loved it.
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Date: 4/1/2010 2:56:00 PM
What a pleasure to read these verses. Beautiful poem filled with much truth..Charma:).
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Date: 4/1/2010 1:04:00 PM
Thankxxx Sue for your wonderful comments on my poetry today.. so enjoyed reading your creative write..luv.. happy Easter too..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/1/2010 12:38:00 PM
Wow Sue! Powerful poem. Love the last line. One of your best! Keep up the good writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Happy Easter. Karen
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Date: 4/1/2010 12:16:00 PM
wow, Sue, I have to echo what Carol said below here. This is maybe the best one of yours that I have seen. this has to be faved! Very profound and a deligth to read. As for my "variety" in writing forms, I am lucky that rhyme offers so many forms. I need those restrictions that "forms" place on me, otherwise, I would be running rampant (too wordy all the time. haha) lUv, andrea
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Date: 3/31/2010 2:31:00 PM
Sue, this is the best I mean the best one you have ever written. This is me Carol and this is MY favorite. Love you my friend, Carol
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Date: 3/31/2010 10:37:00 AM
You reveal so much of yourself in this write, Sue. But it is the total and complete you that I wish to know. Strip away the layers and you have a compassionate heart seasoned through time by struggles and in tune with the needs of others because of your experiences. Really liked the line about the "divorced from me Me." Excellent! Love, Carolyn
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