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Tea Cup Moon

I accidentally erased this sorry.... A tea cup moon hangs in the sky Among diamonds glistening in the eye A shooting star to wish upon Falling to a world somewhere beyond Gentle breezes dancing across water Reflecting moonbeams one after the other Crickets chirping, bullfrogs singing In the distance people laughing Alone on a sandy beach to reflect Those important things I too often neglect I'll fill that tea cup moon up with other wishes And stay here till sunrise releases her golden kisses ©Donna Jones

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/1/2013 7:08:00 PM
This was a very charming, sweet, sensitive and unique poem. The reader can actually picture the story unfolding. nice job
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Date: 2/23/2013 9:53:00 PM
I love to read ones with moonbeams dancing,, I write lines like that. Thank you for reading "Deceitful" You have a blessed day ;}
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/23/2013 9:58:00 PM
You too Debbie take care...blessings
Date: 2/22/2013 12:45:00 AM
this is so charming, Yes, that is the word for it: Charming!!
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/22/2013 3:25:00 PM
Thanks again Andrea....it means a lot you stopping by
Date: 2/20/2013 7:43:00 AM
this is very good my friend..God bless you
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/20/2013 12:01:00 PM
Thanks Betty...likewise....enjoy those sunsets....and sunrises....powerful!
Date: 2/18/2013 10:21:00 PM
Hello Donna, a wonderful image you paint. a sad tint, of wishes.. a beautiful ending..LINDA
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/19/2013 3:58:00 PM
Thanks Linda...oh to have do-overs huh??? Well its still OK....there is tomorrow and if not I won't know about it..have a great evening
Date: 2/18/2013 6:57:00 PM
Still is a tremendous write even if you did erase it accidentally! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/18/2013 7:46:00 PM
Always love seeing that warm smile there...thanks

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