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Citrus petals got stuck in the core of a page. Paper cuts and stains in amber and green. Creamy pearls oozing from ripped skin rage. Fine dew drips from pecks have been seen. Paper cuts and stains in amber and green. Within a kaleidoscope of the seething song. Fine dew drips from pecks have been seen. Hibiscus-scented daydreams waft along. Within a kaleidoscope of the seething song. The vanilla honey aroma on tea leaves talus. Hibiscus-scented daydreams drifting along. A crimson flame whirling in a golden chalice. The vanilla honey aroma on tea leaves talus. Sticky food to let you grip the edges of life. Crimson flame whirling in a golden chalice. Chamomile tea is minding fairy tale strife. Sticky food to let you grip the edges of life. Seeing into the concave mirror of implore. Chamomile tea is minding fairy tale strife. Alluring feeling of restless need to explore. Seeing into the concave mirror of implore. Creamy pearls oozing from ripped skin rage. Alluring feeling of restless need to explore. Citrus petals got stuck in the center of a page.
Written: January 06, 2023

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Date: 1/8/2023 7:39:00 AM
Filled with beautiful images, Sotto:)
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Date: 1/7/2023 6:39:00 AM
Sotto, beautiful writing and poem, I love it! Well done, Constance
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Date: 1/7/2023 6:11:00 AM
Colorful imagery shines in ornate words my friend. A lovely poem you wrote, Lasaad.
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Date: 1/7/2023 2:14:00 AM
Great poetry, Lasaad. I know it's not easy to write a Panton, especially in such a great length. So much imagery too.
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Date: 1/6/2023 8:26:00 PM
wow! WOW! I think this is a masterpiece! A Fav that i will study! This has become my favorite form and, goodness, you wield the true pen of its imagery, total involvement of all senses.Bravo! Standing applause! New year hugs, sally
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Date: 1/6/2023 8:00:00 PM
Wow Lasaad…..this is a real beauty! So perfectly worded…..Debx
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Date: 1/6/2023 7:19:00 PM
Pantoum is your forte and I think with Milton too. You are so good at it...dear friend. I struggle with this form and am therefore never inclined to write one. Enjoyed your flowers dripping with dew, not with tears.
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Date: 1/6/2023 6:18:00 PM
Very well written poetry Sotto
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