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Tattooed Inside

On a cold winters night frosted jewels sparkling the ground burning logs upon a fire dark clouds falling heavy down cloud capped mountains Darkness becomes night pitch black rain falling with all burning might turning to you My fire on steed a hero bringing in the light Whisking one of the feet with burning fire in your eyes ravishing this vision deep do not drop me through the window this soul is with you tattooed inside the heart crystal dew awakening beauty looking upon a dream

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Date: 9/27/2014 8:20:00 PM
Liam . . . A truly magnificent write here in every respect. The imagery you've employed in this poem is truly stunning. I have thoroughly enjoyed it my friend!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/27/2014 11:18:00 PM
thank you gary for the outstanding beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you
Date: 9/20/2014 7:42:00 AM
Beautiful, Liam....You are indeed a hero in my book, for romance is the stuff that heroes are made of. Hugs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/22/2014 6:09:00 AM
sure when one holds such love in the heart thats how i paint wonderful comment thank you kindly eileen
Date: 9/20/2014 12:42:00 AM
How you played magic with the images, moved me... crystal dew awakening beauty looking upon a dream,,, This line is amazing. Nice job done Liam... stay blessed.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/22/2014 5:50:00 AM
malik in all magic love paints all by itself deeply thank you for your gentle kindness deeply appreciated
Date: 9/19/2014 5:28:00 PM
Well played Liam...I like it...Tim
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/22/2014 5:34:00 AM
just opening a deep picture tim
Date: 9/19/2014 5:02:00 PM
Amazing imagery Liam I really enjoyed this write:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/22/2014 5:32:00 AM
thank you so much jan beautiful comment

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