Tattered Yellow Pages

A ripped diary Symbol of forgotten past Thrown in a chimney Burnt without any ash trace Ending a chapter of life For Form T Poetry Contest Sponsored by Broken Wings August 22, 2017 Fifth Place Checked syllable count with How Many Syllables

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Eve Roper

Date: 9/9/2017 12:37:00 PM

Nayda, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 9/12/2017 8:31:00 PM

Thank you Eve.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 8/23/2017 5:25:00 PM

Hi Nayda: A very poignant poem of lost tributes. I recall leaving many written words and albums behind and I always regretted it to this day. QUE LASTIMA!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/23/2017 6:17:00 PM

Indeed Ralph. Gracias.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/22/2017 11:02:00 PM

Very sad, but wonderfully penned, Nayda - enjoyed it very much! Best wishes for the contest - blessings! :-)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/23/2017 7:11:00 AM

Thank you Greg.

Michael Tor

Date: 8/22/2017 8:56:00 PM

Sometimes we want to forget some of things we regret of our past. This write reflects in different ways how to forget those memories. Great thought penned here Nayda. Sometimes I wish it was this easy to do. A winner if I was judging!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/22/2017 9:14:00 PM

Thank you Michael.