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Tattered Heart

My heart received a bash from you, I felt it start to crash from you. I woke up feeling a little blue, Knowing I should dash from you. Now that you have broken my heart, I am wounded by a gash from you. My whole body hurts I feel it bleeds, As I received this lash from you. I started to itch, my skin is crawling, I even received a rash from you My feelings are easy to explain, I simply feel like trash from you. Brenda Meier-Hans Written 2013

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Date: 11/10/2014 11:32:00 PM
Nice
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Date: 8/24/2014 3:59:00 PM
Dear one, you have my condolences!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 8/26/2014 8:19:00 PM
So sweet of you to say this. Actually I was just trying to write Ghazal and it seemed fun to write that at the time. Although many of my poems tell my life story this was just an experiment. I have enjoyed reading some of your poetry and will return again.

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