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Tattered

Ripped, tattered and torn A new addiction born replacing the hope you stole from me why didn't you just let me be? Breaking me over a thousand times leaving me left with my rhymes poems so dark and cold yet leaving your secrets left untold. What I'd do to leave this place and the fear of that face a girl who couldn't say anything to make you pay. I had to grow up so fast living nightmares of the past just a child suffering and you walked away with nothing. I was a little girl with no place to hide then my smile slowly died.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/8/2015 9:06:00 PM
that cuts deep Brandi, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/8/2015 8:59:00 PM
Brandi, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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