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Tasting Bliss

You may not love me that's okay A Taste of you would make my day Others will never know this bliss You bless me with an angel kiss Then swiftly turn and fly away A Catch-Phrase Dazzeler Poetry Contest 1st attempt at a Quintella

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Date: 4/5/2013 9:34:00 PM
Absolutely amazing, Richard. Perfect in every way!
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Date: 1/9/2013 9:06:00 AM
I LOVE the last line. Congratulations, Richard! What an awesome Quintella.
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Date: 1/9/2013 5:14:00 AM
first time read this one, still, your piece always wonderful :) congrats on your big win :D - hug, yanny
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Date: 1/9/2013 2:03:00 AM
Belated congratulations on your winning spot Richard xx
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Date: 1/8/2013 7:08:00 PM
oops, just saw I congratulated you yesterday, but did you notice I was able to get the whole winners list to post, so now I am able to go quickly to every single poet on my list. Awesome!
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Date: 1/8/2013 7:06:00 PM
Glad to see you here on my winners' list, Richard. Very sweet poem you made of the theme.
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Date: 1/8/2013 6:26:00 PM
Congrad's to a rising star of Poetry Soup. Light & Love
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Date: 1/7/2013 6:10:00 PM
richard, I know this placed in my contest (my winner list won't post). I just happened to come upon it by locating my top winners under the title names. I think you got maybe 5th or sixth place for this awesome little poem. Great way to do the topic, Tasting Bliss.
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Date: 12/24/2012 10:13:00 AM
first attempt, does not show, excellent poetry...
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/24/2012 10:51:00 AM
Great Harry u have one up on me, i havent tried yet.....well done... Seren

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