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Tasting a Raindrop

If I was a raindrop would I ever fall... Maybe I would just blend in and stall... I might drift around a sky or two for a ride... And land softly on a tongue that can't hide... My taste may have an artistic blend... But an honest soul that would never bend... Lean your head back when your in the pouring rain... Just might be me fluttering above eyes that are the same...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/15/2012 4:34:00 AM
Awesome write,,, love it ;}
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Date: 6/5/2012 2:43:00 AM
Spectacular IMAGERY !!!
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Date: 5/31/2012 9:41:00 PM
of course I taste with pleasure Michael luv.. the elegance of your amazing words.. always brilliant to excite your JG ..forever and always.. we are over the rainbow.. forever .. and ever..xoxoxoxoxoxoxo luv..
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Date: 5/30/2012 9:33:00 AM
Hi soup xx
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Date: 5/30/2012 6:10:00 AM
Wow, why didn't I read this one yesterday while it was raining? hehe, enjoyed this MJF, got silly me smiling.. Hope you are having a great week :) love Wilma
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Date: 5/29/2012 5:08:00 PM
Very cool. Such creative imagery you always use, Michael!! I am seeing lots of raindrop poems lately but not seeing a contest on raindrops. what am I missing?
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Date: 5/29/2012 12:15:00 AM
Perfect words my dear friend...hope u remember me ..this was so beautifully written....cheeers !
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Date: 5/28/2012 10:44:00 PM
Hello, Michael, how are you?? I love the image... you are a fine coach... he he ... this is very intriguing and cute... i love the rain.. thank you for sharing your awesome poem.. have yourself a good night, always :-) LINDA
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Date: 5/28/2012 8:46:00 PM
this time of year, the misty rain, that gently covers the woods, I can smell the purity, and the rain! love this aspect, it's differnet, appolgies for not reading earlier but so swamped and girls will have their day.......... so :) love to read you, you are one of my favorites, Cindy
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Date: 5/28/2012 8:04:00 PM
Ahh, to be a magical raindrops...such a lovely write Michael! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 5/28/2012 3:33:00 PM
Oh boy, this is sheer Brilliance Michael, harry
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Date: 5/28/2012 12:51:00 PM
Totally Awsome, Michael!! I love it! :) hope all is well...missed ya, huggs, love ya, deb
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Date: 5/28/2012 9:27:00 AM
If I were a snowflake, I would melt when I read this sweet poem Michael. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/28/2012 9:27:00 AM
Michael just love this, very cool buddy..David
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Date: 5/28/2012 9:09:00 AM
I believe this is one of the most artistic writes that I've ever read Michael! You did masterfully with this poem my friend! And I'm sure you would have an artistic taste to you if you were a raindrop! The talent you have is outstanding and shines! Great Work!!
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Date: 5/28/2012 8:35:00 AM
Nice one. xx soup
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Date: 5/28/2012 8:16:00 AM
hi, michael.. been a while.. a magical raindrop you would be!.. what tender energy this piece exudes.. :) huggs!
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