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Taste of Freedom

Chains Forged by you Designed to hold me down Loosening Weakening Your iron grip That forced me to lye To sit by your side Unclenching Relaxing The web You cast around me To make me stay Untwining Unwinding Everything you've done Broken, erased, destroyed You have no more control I run away to my first Taste of freedom

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/25/2011 9:30:00 AM
Congrats Kiki, on this courageous write being featured. Vince
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Date: 5/24/2011 9:58:00 AM
Very strong poem, Kiki. Looking forward to reading more by you!
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Date: 5/24/2011 4:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Kiki
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Date: 5/23/2011 9:19:00 PM
Congratulations Kiki on a fine write, Best CJ
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Date: 5/23/2011 4:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Kiki. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/22/2011 8:01:00 PM
Congrats Kiki on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. great piece to share with us all with luv..
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Date: 5/22/2011 5:45:00 PM
can i bookmark this poem so I can throw it in someones face later on? rofl hehe
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Date: 5/22/2011 3:18:00 PM
I liked the description you used.. nicely done cory
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