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and Ephesians 4:31-32 

Get rid of all bitterness, rage and anger, brawling and slander, along with every form of malice. Be kind and compassionate to one another, forgiving each other, just as in Christ God forgave you.

Seventy seven times this how much Jesus wants us to forgive... but how can we forgive if the hurt or pain they caused us is: a six feet under the ground depth a hammer-like cyclic stigma of shame a freezing fire agonizing the heart and mind? Tears spill from the eyes to drench or lessen the pain yet, to some who aren't relieved they chose to taste death rather than pursuing life. . . Offering the olive branch of friendship, kindness and forgiveness though it seems, hard to do so this to invite peace amidst chaos and misery caused by ill deeds. And if in a way, it is not returned is forgetting a better option? or should one keep trying-- for persistence a way to win restoration...? Forgiving is one of the famous battles we humans face day by day as it is between the head and heart that sometimes these two even is in clash. Anger, pain and pride halt us from forgiving yet, will we choose to sleep in these be confined and contained in these when there is a better choice to let go and forgive? _______________________________________ 1:00 pm, February 19, 2015

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Date: 2/23/2015 9:01:00 AM
forgiveness is the light of loves beauty the wa\y forward excellent pen olive love the imaginary you used dear pal
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/5/2015 3:06:00 AM
thanks much Liam.. ;) I appreciate you stopping by.. :)!
Date: 2/20/2015 4:46:00 AM
Fine poetry Olive, and yes it's better to forgive than allow moments or situations to fester. Have a blessed evening, James :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/23/2015 6:55:00 AM
thanks James.. :) glad you like my poem..
Date: 2/19/2015 6:22:00 AM
Forgiveness releases both the offended and the offender. The offender feels an overwhelming relief, the offended is made free from the recurring hurt. I like the way it ended. The reader is left free to ponder and choose. Awesome 7 Olive. Hugs and smiles...:D Kim
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 2/19/2015 11:49:00 PM
thanks much Kim.. :) indeed it is.. forgiveness is a healing gesture..
Date: 2/19/2015 2:18:00 AM
Between the wood there are wise words carved deeply into the trees! Nicely done, Olive! :) john.
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:15:00 AM
thanks much John.. :)! I just elaborated my idea of forgiveness.. :)!

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