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Tannenbaum

Here I grow, a handsome fir tree, Standing upright within my wood; An innocent, then let me be. Where now I thrive for all to see, Strobilus stemmed out of the bud; Here I grow, a handsome fir tree. Today I prosper, living free, As streaming sap spawns my lifeblood; An innocent, then let me be. Forever green and wild are we, My friends and I'd age if we could; Here I grow, a handsome fir tree. The gentle breeze may hear my plea And listen to me as it should; An innocent, then let me be. So, man is come to sever me, To rob me of my livelihood. Here I grow, a handsome fir tree An innocent, then let me be. Alan S Jeeves

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Date: 1/31/2022 12:14:00 PM
Hi Alan. Enjoyed your villanelle. The evergreens do well all year round. Then there comes the chain-saw sound. Tony
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Alan Jeeves
Date: 1/31/2022 12:48:00 PM
Hello Tony, great to hear from you. Thanks for reading and commenting. I am so pleased that you enjoyed 'Tannenbaum'. Kind regards, Alan
Date: 1/28/2022 12:24:00 PM
Hello Alan Jeeves, once a fur tree is chopped down it is gone. planting a tree in tis place takes time to grow. Enjoy your day my friend. Cheers! Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/29/2022 11:43:00 AM
Hello Alan, yes until the person cuts it down. Hur trees take a long time to grow. Some people chop down the evergreen tree,then toss it away. That is why i say it takes a long time for the tree to grow. Darlene
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Alan Jeeves
Date: 1/28/2022 1:01:00 PM
A fir tree is green and alive all year round - that is, Darlene, until someone comes along and cuts it down. Kind regards, Alan

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