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Tanka the Form K

november the fifth- layered rolls of liquid fog envelope the bonfire- the party becomes a damp squib NOTE:A tanka in English is essentially a 3 line hiku(SHOW)with a couplet amplification (TELL)

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Date: 12/24/2022 10:06:00 AM
I really like the image of "layered rolls of liquid fog", Brian. Bet it was difficult to keep that bonfire going.
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