Tanka the Form J
above the still strand
shrieks of seagulls
die on the inshore breeze-
our twin footsteps disappear
as sunset dissolves
NOTE:A tanka in English is essentially a 3 line hiku(SHOW)with a couplet amplification (TELL)
Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2022
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