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Tanka T1

Nature’s works enwombed gravities' umbilical; Hold me mother earth universe sings cradle song, solar winds whisper… hurry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/1/2012 7:16:00 PM
woah bro. Gravities' umbilical....man! this joint would have Carl Sagan stretchin' out his turtle neck in great celebration! NICE!
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Michael Perritano
Date: 4/2/2012 6:02:00 AM
carl sagan rocks!
Date: 3/27/2012 8:41:00 PM
Michael, love it...wow.. what a tanka, thank you for the lovely poem, I had much fun and thought reading your poem tonight*LUV~PD
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Michael Perritano
Date: 3/28/2012 6:39:00 AM
thank you so much, glad you enjoyed this

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