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Tanka Iv

white bodies lay disturbingly motionless disturbing silence looms after the gigantic, flaming mushroom

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/26/2016 11:17:00 AM
greeat imagery here, teddy... i enjoyed the last line!..huggs
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/27/2016 6:09:00 AM
Hi Nette. Thank you so much for enjoying my verse!! *^_^*

Book: Shattered Sighs