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Tanka 3

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Tanka 3

	Tanka 3
	morning comes, careless 
	tender circumstances, then 
	empty good-bye eyes 
	said it all led to nothing 
	a man of her yesterday 

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  1. Date: 7/24/2013 3:16:00 PM
    yep!! and it was a good one. Another time I will go to your other pages.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/24/2013 3:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I really appreciate your being a reader. Please feel free to tell me if you have suggestions for improvement. I have a tough skin where criticism is concerned... Jack
  1. Date: 6/2/2013 3:57:00 PM
    I really enjoyed this one.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 6/2/2013 4:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks... It's awfully sad, which is what happens with me after several overcast days.