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Tanka 2

This pressure on me
Rooms are closing in, can’t breathe
The worst is yet here
My heart is beating quickly
Panic, this pressure on me

© Holly P. Moore
    October 2012

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  1. Date: 10/28/2012 2:21:00 PM
    Terrible feeling Holly - very well written Tanka 2 - Have a nice new week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/28/2012 2:08:00 AM
    I like this one. A reminder of me "I have been there before" Feeling better thanks. Take care, Jancarl

  1. Date: 10/27/2012 1:16:00 AM
    Whoa! That is not a feeling I would wish on anyone. You've brought out the sense of panic well - the pressure, the inability to breathe, the racing heart -panic is not an ally. And to think the worst has not occured -more pressure. Aaaargh! Very well written Holly!

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 7:50:00 PM
    Your feelings very nicely expressed in this tanka.I agree with Leo.Take a deep breath.

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 6:21:00 PM
    Nice Tanka, Holly. You made us wonder what is coming :) Love ya, Toquyen

  1. Date: 10/26/2012 5:32:00 PM
    Calm down and take a deep breath...the pressure will subside in a short while....