Tanka 1

hope perched in my heart small bird, joyfully singing fragilely balanced feasting on faith's mustard seed contented with Love's promise Copyright, August 24, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/29/2014 2:48:00 PM

This is so beautiful, Faye. Wow...it sings like a song! Congrats on your win! I enjoyed reading this very much...Delightful

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/28/2014 8:13:00 PM

Faye, a wonderful Tanka that presents the imagery of Hope, Faith and Love so well. Congratulations on your win! Sandra

Skat A

Date: 8/28/2014 4:50:00 PM

Hi Faye, Congratulations, on your winning Tanka, SKAT LOVE

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/28/2014 1:55:00 PM

Faye,, Congrats on your "Hope, Faith and Love Tanka win." Love Linda

Jan Allison

Date: 8/28/2014 11:32:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Faye:-) Hugs Jan xx

Elaine George

Date: 8/27/2014 2:39:00 AM

Simply beautiful, Faye. Lainie

Jan Allison

Date: 8/24/2014 6:23:00 PM

I love the imagery here Faye:-) Good luck with the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx