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Tanka 12

Tanka 12 dark skies fuel my melancholy mood winter’s cold rain dampens down my writing mind deadens my ways with words

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Date: 11/24/2013 2:37:00 AM
very nice tanka, Jack.
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Date: 11/24/2013 11:43:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea, on this very gloomy day... Jack
Date: 11/23/2013 2:23:00 PM
Your words seem lively to me! So this is number 12, 88 to go Jack.
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Date: 11/24/2013 11:43:00 AM
That's a bit daunting, but... Jack
Date: 11/23/2013 7:09:00 AM
- A touching / sad poem, Jack ..... maybe "Yellow boots sings" will give you a smile (???) - Have a great weekend, Jack! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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