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Tango Serenade

Her red dress Flowing in the air Like flames It burns, Her wide hazel eyes Sharply looks, Her Brown tall curls Dance Whenever she turns around and makes a loud sound with her high healed black sandals, Her thick red lips softly sings. He passionately plays his violin, His stick goes back and forth on its strings, His arm quickly moves, His deep black eyes directly stares at her; tracing every movement waiting every reaction. She feels she wants more, She can move more, dance more, He provides her with energy; His eyes, his smile, His music controles every movement she makes, every sound she utters. His stick, His magnetic force, His creative powers invites her to life He is a magician! She can dance forever, look at his face forever, hear his music forever, love him forever. Now, He owns the world.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/1/2012 9:20:00 AM
I love it ! I love it ! I love it ! I love it ! I love it ! I love it ! hhhhhhhhhhhh thank you !! You're in love Omneya : I envie you :) cuz some people can't !!
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 11/4/2012 4:12:00 AM
heyyyy glad you like the poem! and btw when a poet write about love it doesnt mean she is in love :D it means she can imagine well what it should be like :) have a good week! Omneya
Date: 10/17/2012 8:08:00 AM
I love it! Love how you've started it from her point of view, then his, then both of them together. They both show the passion in what they do. And the consequence of the actions plays out well in the end with the man feeling victorious. Very nice Omneya!
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/18/2012 12:31:00 PM
Vicky thank you for your amazing analysis for the poem! you made me see the poem differently in a way I didn't think of before! Will always wait your opinion on my new writings! Love, Omneya
Date: 10/16/2012 1:24:00 PM
Wow, love the rhythm and the imagery in this gem Omneya ;) you got me smiling especially love your ending!
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/18/2012 12:28:00 PM
Hey Wilma, Thanks alot for your lovely comment! Have a great week end! Omneya
Date: 10/16/2012 7:39:00 AM
Ohh...wonderful!!Love this!
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/18/2012 12:23:00 PM
Thanks Kash so glad you like it! have a good week end! Omneya
Date: 10/16/2012 5:22:00 AM
It sounds like music to my ears Omneya!! Gorgeous poem. - Love it !!! Have a wonderful day. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Omneya Kamal
Date: 10/18/2012 12:21:00 PM
Thanks Anne for your amazing support! Have a good week end Love, Omneya..

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