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There is a tangled vine, that grows It grows between the centuries Two centuries old, it can't be seen Between us now, it has a hold on me, and all my reasoning Defying time that lies between us I've read each word between the lines The words you wrote have landed here Bringing with them all the years I can feel you standing here with me Words can do that, I can see you! They capture me within my soul,...I know of love, I know,... I know... The love I feel, a tangled vine That grows between your earth and mine This was your world...I've made it mine... Though we may speak with different tongues... Some things are timeless, from the start I know of love,..... I know, I know Your words have caught me in my throat.... A vine of loneliness imparts And tendrils of my own, my heart Reach out to tell you so.... I feel the pull so deep inside How strange and crazy, this may be I know of love.........I know..... I know somewhere, away from here Somewhere deep on different shores Our stars are meant to cross again I know of love............I know I feel your presence here with me It matters not the century A tangled vine was sent for me To cling, until my eyes can see you reaching out for me There is a tangled vine, that grows between Two centuries old, it can't be seen Between us now, it has a hold that defies all lucid reasoning ________________________________________________ Inspired by Constance La France's Contest: Tangled Vines Submitted once again for Skat's Contest "Old Love Poem" 11/9/15

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Date: 11/21/2015 12:26:00 AM
Carrie :) Congratulations on your placement. ThanXs for supporting my contest. <3 Love SKAT
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Date: 7/13/2013 2:47:00 AM
Ow my Carrie..Why do i always have to mist my eyes when im reading your poetry..You are amazing-Charna
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Date: 7/11/2013 12:23:00 PM
Just amazing!!!Great poetry by you Carrie.
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Date: 7/11/2013 8:04:00 AM
Gripping and heartfelt. My God, do I know how this feels. And, you know, Love is just that: Defied Reasoning. Fantastic job, Carrie.
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Date: 7/11/2013 3:33:00 AM
The repeats of 'I know of love...I know' makes me weak in the knees...I'm terrible at interpretation (I have trouble with Mother Goose) but your reference to 'centuries old' gives me a sense of re-incarnation here, as if you and your soul mate were lovers many times in the past perhaps?...Maybe that's the true definition of 'soul mate'...You keep topping yourself my friend - Tim
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Date: 7/11/2013 12:48:00 AM
these tangled vines of yours bind and blend one to your poetry, Carrie, this is truly beautiful poetry
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