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Tangled Vines

The old cypress steadily marks her walk Where trembling birds roost under misty rain, And pauses along a washed-stoned graveyard Shrouded by tangled vines of littered memories... Gentle her breath the breeze upon heaving chest While threadbare leaves stoop on this marsh Breaths linger deep to caress edges, That only winds understand a twin-soul gone... Just before the stars faded on her prayers She strides down the lane, to cross a wooden bridge Until arms of ocean below her throbbing feet Carry scenes and vignettes of a distant place; Flushed ashore like splinters of ocean glass. Contest: Heart and Soul by Kelly Deschler

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Date: 3/24/2014 3:25:00 AM
Wow! I loved this one Nette. It would be at the top for me. I am fav'ing this one. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/19/2014 9:11:00 PM
congrats on your win, a very visual poem
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Date: 3/19/2014 4:20:00 PM
Nette,. Congratulations in "Kelly D's Heart And Soul, contest." Always & Forever *XOX* LINDA
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Date: 3/19/2014 1:18:00 PM
another great poem my dear... a big congratulations!!!! .. ^__^
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Date: 3/19/2014 1:31:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine win, enjoyed yoiur write on Heart and soul, nette
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Date: 3/18/2014 10:13:00 PM
Nette, you put A lot of Heart And Soul into your writing, enjoyed your winning poem.... Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/18/2014 7:25:00 PM
Only you could write such a wonderful poem. Congrats Nette on your win.....Hugs.....Roger
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Date: 7/30/2013 2:42:00 PM
Ahhh!! Excellent poetic quality in this winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 7/3/2013 8:34:00 AM
I love going on these nature trips, your imagery is exquisite.
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Date: 7/2/2013 11:16:00 PM
Such imagery, Nette. And I just saw the November poem of yours that Debs showed at her blog. that one is super amazing!
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Date: 7/2/2013 8:21:00 PM
You have impressed me with your language here with this enlightening write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening, especially the lines, "...She strides down the lane, to cross a wooden bridge, Until arms of ocean crest below her throbbing feet..." those lines are so beautiful Nette! What an amazing piece, such an incredible poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 7/2/2013 5:49:00 PM
Ring-a-ding-ding...Soup mail for you, Nette (You bet!)
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Date: 7/2/2013 5:41:00 PM
nette, good grief, you are a poetic genius. You illuminate the page with perfection. I am absolutely a fan :)
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Date: 7/2/2013 2:05:00 PM
Why do you keep writing such strong poems so quickly?! :) No wonder you start to get restless 3 hours after I post a poem. ;) This piece was absolutely mesmerizing. Ah, the power of memories. Both broken & otherwise...
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Date: 7/2/2013 12:26:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work..It was like being there at the shore..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara
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